A big thanks to Gobblers/Masticadores for taking me aboard as a contributing writer. This is truly a diverse writing platform for writers from all across the world. Read ahead and click the blue link to enjoy the entire story. Cheers!
We incorporate a new collaborator in Gobblers / Masticadores Welcome Terveen!
Today I will be married, and the entire village is invited. Is that why my mother cries? I have seen her wet cheeks and swollen eyes. Yet she pretends it’s the dusty wind that bothers her. Is she overwhelmed? Saddened to […]
Flash Fiction Story – The Village Bride by Terveen Gill — Gobblers / Masticadores
wow ! what a slammer of an ending !!!!
Thank you so much, John! It spooked me too. 🙂
That is wonderful news, Terveen. You deserve it. Congratulations!. You have great storytelling abilities. Best wishes – shobana
Thanks so much, Shobana. Your kind words are always appreciated. 🙂
Already entered congratulations on Gobblers…..
Thanks Don. 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
Congratulations, Tarveen, on joining the Gobblers / Masticadores.
Wow, the ending took me by surprise. Thankful for my modest life am I 🙂
Nothing should be taken by granted, now rain, nor what looks like a bright future.
Thank you so much, Patricia. We don’t appreciate the simple liberties and amenities of life because they are laid out before us. Some have it really bad. It’s sad.
Awesome read. It left a pit in my stomach.
Thank you so much! It is a dark one.
That was quite the unexpected ending. The way the narrator seemed at peace with it really heightened the uneasiness. A well written piece!
And congrats on your news!
Thank you so much! It was the calm before the storm. Such is life.
Appreciate your kind words. 🙂
Wow. How awesome. Congratulations, Terveen! 😊
Thank you, Jeff! 🙂
Congrats on the new gig! May it bring you fulfillment and draw from you wondrous tales to delight and amaze your readership! Wishing you much success!
Thanks a lot Rhyan!
Your wishes mean a lot. May the words be with you. 🙂
Congratulations on you’re excellent storytelling…🤙🏼😁
Thank you so much, Hal!
Appreciate it. 🙂
I love the sentiment of scene setting. You gave away the feeling all the way through but the turth only revealed in the end.
Thanks so much, Cassa. Twists! Ahhhh! You can’t help but love them.