Flash Fiction Story – The Village Bride by Terveen Gill — Gobblers / Masticadores

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A big thanks to Gobblers/Masticadores for taking me aboard as a contributing writer. This is truly a diverse writing platform for writers from all across the world. Read ahead and click the blue link to enjoy the entire story. Cheers!

We incorporate a new collaborator in Gobblers / Masticadores Welcome Terveen! link to blog/website

Today I will be married, and the entire village is invited. Is that why my mother cries? I have seen her wet cheeks and swollen eyes. Yet she pretends it’s the dusty wind that bothers her. Is she overwhelmed? Saddened to […]

Flash Fiction Story – The Village Bride by Terveen Gill — Gobblers / Masticadores

22 Comments on “Flash Fiction Story – The Village Bride by Terveen Gill — Gobblers / Masticadores

  1. That is wonderful news, Terveen. You deserve it. Congratulations!. You have great storytelling abilities. Best wishes – shobana

  2. Congratulations, Tarveen, on joining the Gobblers / Masticadores.
    Wow, the ending took me by surprise. Thankful for my modest life am I 🙂
    Nothing should be taken by granted, now rain, nor what looks like a bright future.
    Well done!

    • Thank you so much, Patricia. We don’t appreciate the simple liberties and amenities of life because they are laid out before us. Some have it really bad. It’s sad.

  3. That was quite the unexpected ending. The way the narrator seemed at peace with it really heightened the uneasiness. A well written piece!

    And congrats on your news!

  4. Congrats on the new gig! May it bring you fulfillment and draw from you wondrous tales to delight and amaze your readership! Wishing you much success!

  5. I love the sentiment of scene setting. You gave away the feeling all the way through but the turth only revealed in the end.

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