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A woman finds herself in captivity.
A man is using her to satisfy his own ambition.
She surrenders herself completely to him.
In the hope that he might find what has always been missing.
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The smell was intolerable. A defiant odor reigned heavily in the air, masking the familiarity of the stagnant space. Two reluctant hands probed the limits of her body. She was still, her beautiful eyes creased shut. The unnerving tremble would never return to haunt her again. Her body was a careless mystery, the secrets within […]Jagged Existence by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores
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You totally had me hooked, Terveen. This is one of my favorites!
Thanks so much, David. Much appreciated. 🙂
This is fantastic! Kept me engaged and interested to the last word.
Thanks so much, Cassa. I felt compelled to write this storm of emotions. 🙂
a terrible indictment of the cruelty unleashed by prejudice; gripping narrative —
Thank you so much, John. The damage is often irreversible. Appreciate it. 🙂
A wonderful piece of writing, Terveen, gripping right to the end. A clever and uncomfortable perspective to take, which works very well.
Thank you so much, Davy. Wanted to bring out the horror in a way so that the ending would make a hard impact. Death and beyond…forever unresolved…
What a wonderful twist ending!
Thanks so much, Dawn. Much appreciated. 🙂
An excellent write, Terveen. Your writing is always so inspiring to read. 😊
Thank you so much, Jeff. I appreciate the support and encouragement very much. 🙂
Oh, what a surprise ending. And she’s just a corpse but she’s not dead even though she has never belonged. You have kept me guessing…
Thanks so much, Haoyan. Life is a maze of twists and turns and so are we humans. 🙂