Come to Me by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores – Flash Fiction
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She’s there to soothe. She’s there to comfort. She’s there to take away the pain.
How can any person resist her?
When all seems lost, she’s the last resort.
Can you hear her calling you? I really hope not.
Who is she? Read ahead and click the blue link to find out. Thanks!
Come to me. You’re a man in need. Shh…be quiet. No one must know. Your secrets are safe with me. They’ll never see the light of day. Leave behind your name and age. Everything looks the same in the darkness. You want to speak. I’ve heard too many tales. Let me drink from your lips […]
Come to Me by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores
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Terveen Gill is a versatile author and writer who has had the pleasure of growing up on two different continents. Having spent her childhood years in the United States, she returned to India, and has since been living in Chandigarh, a beautiful city in North India. Choosing engineering as her path, she obtained a bachelor's degree in Computer Science. However, paths are discovered only to be changed. Life's unpredictable tale made her realize her passion for writing, and thus began a journey that is transforming into a wonderful literary experience. The author of graphic novels and short stories, versatility is her secret weapon. From a storyteller to a film-maker, script-writing, film direction and film editing are pursuits that challenge and enhance her creativity. Her motto is, ‘If it can be imagined, it is already half-done’.
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Oh! I was wondering where this was going, but I have to admit that I didn’t figure it out on my own, Terveen… Very cleverly done! Excellent!
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David
Ahh! I’m so glad that it was a surprise revelation. Thank you, David. I must admit too – I often don’t know where I’m going either (in many respects). 🙂
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A great twist as always with your writing, Terveen. The script plays out like the end of a movie. Plenty of scope to write the story that comes before?
Thank you so much, Davy. Yes, the before would be quite a revelation. I appreciate it. 🙂
Wow another outstanding piece! 👏💚
Thank you so much, Cassa. Wanted that surprise plunge for the reader. 🙂
I was absolutely surprised and marveled at the name of Suicide Valley.
Another hauntingly beautiful piece, Terveen! Wow!👏👌
Thanks so much, Aaysid!
Always a pleasure.😊
What a surprise ending. I’ve always been fascinated with your ability to make something so sad so beautiful. Life can be hauntingly beautiful in such a sad ending…
I love how you say this. Yes, there is something hauntingly beautiful about sadness. It’s difficult to put the exact feeling into words. But it’s somehow peaceful.
This is a dark one, with many tidbits of wisdom about the self throughout. Lovely write, Terveen.
Thank you so much, Jeff. The self is always in contemplation. I just pray that those who suffer always feel that there is a way to move on. Have a great week ahead. 🙂
You’re welcome, Terveen. Always. Indeed, the self is; and, I pray for them too. Thank you, a great week ahead to you too. 😊
Thanks Terveen, this is flash fiction at it’s best.
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. 🙂
you are really good and the twist are always surprising
Thanks so much, Tony. I really appreciate it. Good to have you back. 🙂
you are welcome! and thanks for the welcome back! 🤗✨