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To Punish my Mother by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores
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What goes on in the mind is truly a mystery.
Call it confusion, madness, or illness.
But certain acts can never be forgiven.
Or is a mother’s love beyond repercussion?
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Anger. Rage. Murder. These are the steps Charlie took, climbing ever so slowly, lingering, stalling, debating, but never turning back. He wasn’t familiar with the paths of reason, understanding, compassion, kindness. He only saw the steps. And he climbed them. One by one. Eager to complete the ascent and then gladly repeat it. They were […]
10 Comments on “To Punish my Mother by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores”
a powerful narrative; he sure had a powerful instinct; a frightful ending: you always had a glimmer of hope that he’d be cured: people like him are to be pitied and feared ; well written, Terveen —
Thank you so much, John. Unlike physical ailments, mental ones are still far from being understood. And those suffering pass their pain and miseries on. Monster is a convenient word but so inappropriate.
Dang, that’s sinister, and amazingly crafted. It’s unfortunate, yet your write expresses a reality for some people. I am hoping not too many. 😅 Awesome write, Terveen. 😊
If we are bent on doing something evil, our mind has the capacity to concoct a story to justify that act. The man, even if mentally unstable, still has that unstable mind, which can probably cook up whatever way it wants the body to act! I felt like reading a case in a psychology book!
Terveen is an Indian author based in Chandigarh, India. A qualified Computer Engineer, she uses tools such as feelings, thoughts, and actions, and codes them into stories that reflect the complexities and absurdities of life and beyond.
A thorough professional, her passion for writing is neatly packaged within her expertise and versatility. Nothing can escape the scope of her words. She's the author of graphic novels, short stories books, and writes and directs short films.
a powerful narrative; he sure had a powerful instinct; a frightful ending: you always had a glimmer of hope that he’d be cured: people like him are to be pitied and feared ; well written, Terveen —
Thank you so much, John. Unlike physical ailments, mental ones are still far from being understood. And those suffering pass their pain and miseries on. Monster is a convenient word but so inappropriate.
Sadly he couldn’t see another way.
Yes, he was bound by his mind. It’s sad…
Who was his next victim? His mother or did he kill himself?
Could be either, both, or neither. A disturbing fact.
This is utterly horrifying, Terveen ~ just ~ WOW! 😱
Well written, but ~ oy!
<3
David
I appreciate it, David. The mind can be the most unreliable place…
Dang, that’s sinister, and amazingly crafted. It’s unfortunate, yet your write expresses a reality for some people. I am hoping not too many. 😅 Awesome write, Terveen. 😊
If we are bent on doing something evil, our mind has the capacity to concoct a story to justify that act. The man, even if mentally unstable, still has that unstable mind, which can probably cook up whatever way it wants the body to act! I felt like reading a case in a psychology book!